Footsteps: 6

This photo was taken on Sept 20th, 2006. At this point I have worked approximately 60 hours on this drawing. Roger Nelson gave me a feedback and pointed out a considerable number of things I needed to do to complete the cast drawing.
- Dark values need to be "brought up" in many areas, especially the heel and the stone platform.
- There are drawing and value problems with the toes that need to be corrected. This was not what I wanted to hear.
- The dark shading on the top of the foot has too many lines in it. It needs to be worked so that the lines disappear and it takes on the texture of velvet. He suggested that I brush it to bring it down a tone or two and then add more charcoal in a circular stroke or in a stroke that mimicked the direction of the "rythym".
- The background also has too many lines. It should take on the appearance of atmosphere. He suggested brushing it to even it out, which I did - and that worked!
- Many of my darker area need to have their edges softened.
- The areas where the light and the dark come together need to be "worked". this is the fine nuance of the drawing. They should not touch each other but should each soften into the neutral tone of the paper. The raw paper is where they meet.
- One of the last things I should do is add a very white, the most white, and crisp line along the edge of the heel and in the whitest areas close to the ankle. Likewise the dark line between the foot and the stone is the darkest dark and I must strive to make it so.
All in all, quite a bit left to do.
But I liked Katie's feedback the best: when you are done, paint the toenails red!




